Beautiful People– One Last Post for LASER

Hi, reader-peeps.

As the title suggests, this is the last time I will be posting a LASER post. At least for the foreseeable future. For right now, I am considering LASER a story for myself. Something like fan fiction of characters I didn’t know very well from another story. And if nothing else, it helped me figure out who those characters are so if I ever want to write them again (or their children, more likely), I know who they are.

All that being said, I said in the last Beautiful People tag post, I wanted to do this tag with two more characters from LASER, who never got a spotlight in this tag on their own: Gavin MacBay and Elden Carp.

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Let’s start with Gavin.

He is Riley’s boyfriend and comes from a very superstitious family.

I do not have an accurate picture of him.

How did you come up with this character?

Gavin really just appeared. For that matter, so did Riley. I knew I wanted my MC Isabella to have a best friend and that was Riley. I knew Riley had a boyfriend. That was Gavin.

Have they ever been starving? Why? And what did they eat to break the fast?

No. I don’t think so.

Do they have a talent or skill that they’re proud of?

Gavin used to build Rube Goldberg contraptions when he was a kid.

List 3 things that would make them lose their temper.

Gavin is honestly a pretty calm person in general. But someone endangering his family or friends would make him angry to say the least. Someone acting stupidly also angers him.

What is their favourite type of weather? Least favorite?

Sunshine is his favorite (hot enough to going swimming is the best). Least favorite is below 0 degrees.

What is their Hogwarts house and/or MBTI personality?

I’m not going to even try to figure out MBTI.

I am 98% sure Gavin is Gryffindor. He’s also the only character in LASER that I have sorted as Gryffindor. (I haven’t sorted absolutely all of them, though.)

Are they more likely to worry about present problems, or freak out about the unknown future?

Gavin worries about the present, not the future.

What is their favourite thing to drink?

Coke.

What is their favourite color? Least favorite?

Green! Least favorite would probably be burgundy.

What is a book that changed their life?

Gavin, what books have you actually read? 

I don’t know. I’ll think about this.

 

Now for Mr. Carp.

Elden Carp is the weapons teacher at LASER. He’s an elf– think like Legolas, not Santa’s elves.

Once again, I have no picture. NO WAIT HOLD ON.

Haldir. He stayed in Lothlorien. Really.:

YES! NOW MOVING ON!

How did you come up with this character?

Mr. Carp was also made up on the spot. LASER needed a weapons teacher.

Have they ever been starving? Why? And what did they eat to break the fast?

Again, no.

Do they have a talent or skill that they’re proud of?

Pride goes before a fall. But he very good with all weapons.

List 3 things that would make them lose their temper.

Mr. Carp does not lose his temper. Ever. It’s like he’s not human… oh wait.

What is their favourite type of weather? Least favorite?

Mr. Carp loves the rain. Thunder and lightning are glorious.

Hurricanes are not glorious.

What is their Hogwarts house and/or MBTI personality?

You know what? I’m going to say that Elden is Gryffindor, too. He could also be Ravenclaw, but I really think he’s more Gryffindor.

Are they more likely to worry about present problems, or freak out about the unknown future?

Mr. Carp worries about present problems but it’s not really worrying as much as it is thinking about them in order that they might be dealt with properly. He doesn’t worry. Ever. It’s like he’s not human… oh wait.

What is their favourite thing to drink?

House Ruby.  "We drink milk!":

What is their favourite color? Least favorite?

Purple.

He can’t stand yellow.

What is a book that changed their life?

War and Peace by Tolstoy. He started devouring the classics ravenously after that.

 

And that’s it! I hope you guys enjoyed this. Hopefully soon I’ll be ready to share more about my new story and we can do fun things with that.

Kate out.

 

The Editing Diaries–All the Force of a Great Typhoon (or The End?)

Welcome to my series, The Editing Diaries!

In a nutshell, I’m editing my story LASER and bringing you guys along for the ride. I want you to see how my process for editing novels works (and maybe I’ll figure out my process with you). So, buckle your seatbelts, we’re going on a trip!

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Hi, reader-peeps.

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Imma feed you all. You get porridge! And it’s HAPPY TO SEE YOU!

I’ve said a few times that I have been writing for over ten years. I realized recently that that particular statement is not the entire truth. While it is true that I do indeed consider the beginning of my writing journey to be in about 2004, I have been only writing with writing craft in mind for 3 years.

That’s right. THREE years.

I learned how to critique in about July of 2013. I was a beta-reader for the first time in August of 2013. I “edited” a story over the course of the next 9 months. I have finished two first drafts since August of 2014.

Wait, how many?

TWO.

2

The Number After One.

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Is this a bad thing, Katie?

No. Of course not. It’s actually a good thing.

It’s just not a lot.

Hemingway is credited with a quote that says “We are all apprentices in a craft in which we will never be masters.” (I may have mangled that a bit…). When you’re a writer, you don’t stop learning. But there are different levels of experience.

And I’m not sure that I am at the level I thought I was. I thought I was ready to query. Or thought that LASER was almost ready. At least one of those things is not true. LASER is going to need more work. I could probably use some more teaching myself.

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What are you saying, Katherine?

I’m putting LASER aside for now.

I don’t know how long that’s going to be. Could be a few months. Could be a few years. Could be forever. Or it could be just a few months.

This is the end of The Editing Diaries. Or at least it’s going on hiatus for a while. Mainly because I don’t have anything to edit (or anything that I want to edit).

What’s the plan then?

I’m going to write. Just write. Nothing LASER- related. Maybe the next novel will be something that I can work into getting it ready for publication. Or the one after. Or some novels down the road. But right now, I’m just going to write. Just focus on telling a story and having fun. The thing about writing is that you get better by doing it. Will I ever be a perfect writer? No. But can I come close? I hope so.

Mastering The Art of Flying

So, I’m going to write and have fun and maybe lock my internal editor out of the metaphorical house because she’s being a bit annoying.

Is this the last you’ll hear of LASER? I doubt it. I still have a few characters who never got to be interviewed with the Beautiful People tag. And one day, maybe I’ll take LASER out of it’s document and salvage the good stuff and throw out the dross and continue to make it lovely. Or I’ll just hide it away.

To all the people who beta-read or are still beta-reading, thank you. Your feedback is greatly appreciated, even now; your notes are helping me figure out what I still need to work on. Hopefully, next time, I’ll be able to send you a story that doesn’t need quite so much work.

To my precious alphas, thank you for the encouragement to keep writing in spite of all this and for being the shoulders I cry on when writing is hard. You guys are the best of friends and I thank God for each of you.

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And now…

Death or Story!

Mulan training as ping. *knife hand* *duck* *spinning outside crescent kick*

 

 

 

The Editing Diaries–The Beginning of the End

Welcome to my series, The Editing Diaries!

In a nutshell, I’m editing my story LASER and bringing you guys along for the ride. I want you to see how my process for editing novels works (and maybe I’ll figure out my process with you). So, buckle your seatbelts, we’re going on a trip!

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Salutations, reader-peeps.

So, nearly all of my beta-readers have LASER in their possession.

Which is exciting. But it has also occurred to me that editing while they have it is somewhat pointless.

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I can’t fix what mistakes I catch and keep sending them updated drafts. That would be crazy.

So… I’m not editing right now.

Thank God I have other writing projects to work on while I’m not editing. For whatever reason, if I don’t have a writing project at any given time, I go nuts. Can’t focus. Start worrying that my last project was indeed my last project forever (especially when plot bunnies aren’t being compliant).

But I do have two more projects going and I’m looking forward to revealing those sometime within the next couple of months.

Also, I need to start getting a query letter for LASER together.

Which makes me realize just how close to the end of all this that I am.  I mean, once I get beta-feedback and revise and get a query letter together, this stage in LASER‘s life is over. It’ll be time to move on and query and get published, if at all possible.

It’ll be time to move on to something else.

Which… I kind of already have moved on. At least, I have started to.

Again, I really want to reveal my new stuff. But if you’ve been around this blog for long, you will know that I can’t talk about new projects without losing momentum.

Treasure Planet gif. "Zip your howling screamer."
My internal struggle.

Anyway.

So, short post. But an important one, I think.

On another random note, the YAvengers writing blog is recruiting again! They’re looking for more writers to pretend to be Marvel superheroes while they write about writing.

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So, take a look if you’re interested. Or not. The form is open until July 1st.

Now then…

Let’s go carpe the heck out of this diem.

Sure this movie got kind of overplayed but, seriously. The animation in Frozen was amazing! Especially in the let it go sequence, how the light reflected off the ice and stuff! Epic!

 

Summer!

Hiya, reader-peeps!

Summer is upon us and with that comes summer plans and summer TBRs and plans to go swimming or camping or gardening or start a new novel.

Olaf references Bert’s penguin dance from Mary Poppins when he performs “The Summer Song.”

Hey, Katie. What are your plans for the summer?

So glad you asked!

1. 100-4-100!

In case you don’t know, 100-4-100 is a challenge hosted by Go Teen Writers in  which you write 100 words every day for 100 days. It starts June 1st. You’re allowed to work on one project only (there are exceptions to this rule), with one grace day a week and one grace week for the entire challenge. I’ve done it a few times before and it really does help get through drafts.

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2. Vacation Bible School

VBS is always fun. This year, I am working in crafts, where I will be explaining where the stickers go and that paper is not for eating.

3. Editing!

Because LASER is not done yet. I hopefully will be getting it to betas within the next few weeks.

4. Writing!

Editing does not translate well into 100-4-100.

I think I’m going to spend the last few days of May outlining this new novel and trying to figure out what the heck I’m doing with it because I am having a lot of trouble getting it started.

We’re going to do something scary and see how fast we can plot this thing using Cait’s method.

Why is it scary? Because 1. we are resorting to outlining at all, 2. it’s fabulous Cait plotting and while she is fabulous, this is her plotting and it may not work for me (because I am not Cait), 3. we have to keep editing during this, and 4. there are only a few days left in May.

5. Reading

Because we can’t forget this.

I honestly don’t know what exactly I’m going to read this summer. (Any suggestions?)

6. Driver’s License!

Because I don’t have one yet. And I need one. And once I get one, I will have no reason that I can’t go to the library and get  books. Or a job. Or both.

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7. Ch1Con! 

This will be my first writer’s conference ever and I will also be going with Lily J. one of my bestest friends ever! SO EXCITED!!!

Quiz: Which Frozen Quote Should Be Your Life Motto?8. Secret Project. 

This is a secret for now. So I’m not telling anyone yet.

9.? 

I feel like I’m missing something big, but I’m…

OH.

9. Blogeversary! 

Pokémon Gifs- Remember watching this vid and thinking "Why are they so much cuter when they can talk?"

Spiral-Bound will be two years old in a little more than a week! Not yet sure how we will be celebrating.

10. My Birthday

Which is in August. Not sure yet how we will be celebrating.

So, that’s some of what I am going to do this summer.  What are your summer plans, reader-peeps? And is anyone else going to Ch1Con?

 

The Editing Diaries–DONE

Welcome to my series, The Editing Diaries!

In a nutshell, I’m editing my story LASER and bringing you guys along for the ride. I want you to see how my process for editing novels works (and maybe I’ll figure out my process with you). So, buckle your seatbelts, we’re going on a trip!

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DRAFT FOUR OF LASER IS DONE.

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AND I AM QUITE PLEASED.

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Like this! Look how pleased they are!

 

56,367 words! My baby grew so big! It was a 38k first draft.

So… now what, Katie? What’s the plan?

My plan is this:

  1. Go over Alpha-beta Reader Amanda’s notes and make small adjustments.
  2. PRINT IT ALL. Double-spaced.
  3. Write all over it, changing words and sentences.
  4. Implement the notes.
  5. Send draft to all my beta-readers hopefully at the beginning of June.

But right now, I’m going to bed. I’m tired.

Good night, reader-peeps! Go carpe the heck out of your noctems.

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Updates and Things

Hi, reader-peeps!

So, it’s been a couple weeks.

Long story short, I’ve been away on a top-secret, classified mission that is full of redundancy. All and every thing is redundant. And repeated.

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Okay, I’ve just been uninspired and editing LASER.

Or have I??????

That look my friends and I give each other when we see someone in our class get in trouble

 

So. Editing is going well and fast. Well, was going fast. I had one day where I did seven chapters, but they didn’t need much. And then I promptly got stuck on a chapter that needs to be rewritten or trashed or both.

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What else have I been doing?

Acquiring beta-readers (10 is quite enough I think… oops).

Lightly plotting my next project (I gotta do SOMETHING once I get done researching agents and still waiting on beta-feedback).

Stalking people on Tumblr.

Cleaning the house.

Playing Multiplayer Minecraft with a couple of my hobbits (and trying to get a server to work).

Wondering how I still don’t know what a side-charrie from my next project wants, even though I wrote the original in 2011.

(Next project is most likely a reboot, by the way. And I need to shut up about it now.)

Trying to come up with a new title for LASER. And I feel like I’m getting close. (Betas, if I haven’t figured it out by the time I send the story to you, I will probably draft you into helping ask for your help.)

Waiting for the release of The Raven King by Maggie Steifvater.

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And that’s about it!

So. What have you been up to?

Carpe the heck out of your diems!

 

The Editing Diaries–Isabella

Welcome to my series, The Editing Diaries!

In a nutshell, I’m editing my story LASER and bringing you guys along for the ride. I want you to see how my process for editing novels works (and maybe I’ll figure out my process with you). So, buckle your seatbelts, we’re going on a trip!

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Good day to you, my lovely reader-peeps!

I hope you all had a lovely Easter. I certainly did.

So! Editing update!

I am up to the midpoint! Sort of. It’s technically still pre-midpoint, I think, but things are going faster now and I’m more excited because stuff is happening. We are leading up to the midpoint and it is awesome!

Also, I started learning French because I completely underestimated how much I’d be using it with these few characters.

So. Having been a bit AWOL in the blogging department, I thought it was definitely time to post. And I decided to do the Beautiful People tag from this month and talk about my LASER MC, Isabella.

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What first inspired this character? Is there a person/actor you based them off?

Isabella was actually in a book I wrote 4 1/2 years ago, but grown up and someone’s mother. Someone’s kidnapped mother, Percy Jackson-style. But Isabella didn’t get to be fierce and confident girl she is now until a rewrite of said previous book and then more so in her own story.

As for if there is a person I based her off of… not really. I wanted to write a kick-butt YA heroine and I wanted to write a Pride and Prejudice style romance for her. And while she does have a trait or two of mine, I didn’t base her off of me.

Describe their daily routine.

Wake up. Fight. Sleep.

That is really it. I don’t mean literally fight (though sometimes she does). I mean she faces the day, ready to take on whatever life throws at her and win (most of the time; if she were completely ready, there wouldn’t be romance here, I think).

Alternatively: Wake up. Train. Sleep.

If they joined your local high school, what clique would they fit into?

This is not a good question for a homeschooler to answer. And I’m hesitant to shove her into any one clique. Moving on.

Write a list of things they merely tolerate. Ex: certain people, foods, circumstances in their lives…

-The romantic attempts of one of her friends

-Being called Iz (she absolutely will not tolerate ‘Izzy’)

-Her brother leaving the milk jug out on the counter in the morning

-Sci-fi movies (she is not a Star Wars fan or a superhero fan)

-Her other friend’s matchmaking attempts (though she is just barely tolerant of that)

-Assigned reading (suddenly I’m starting to wonder if I’ve got yet another character who doesn’t read for fun that often)

How do they react in awkward silences?

Wait for the silence to be over.

Can they swim? If so, how did they learn?

I have never thought about this.

Yes, Isabella can swim. She probably learned  when she became a LASER apprentice when she was about 14 (I can totally see swimming as part of LASER’s academic requirements).

What is one major event that helped shape who they are?

When she started her LASER apprenticeship. LASER’s apprentice program is training for teens who might be interested in one day having a job with LASER, protecting humans from creatures of myth and legend. I think Isabella must have already been ambitious, but LASER probably helped her focus those ambitions. It possibly also made her more competitive. And she is very competitive.

What things do they value most in life?

Being the best. Her family. Her friends. Trust.

Do they believe in giving other people second chances? Do they have any trust issues?

I think so, yes. (And she certainly needs a lot of second chances herself…)

This whole book is about Izzy’s trust issues.

Your character is having a rough day…what things do they do to make them happy again? Is there anyone they talk/interact with to get in a better mood?

Isabella goes to her godmother’s house and talks to her. Talking to her godmother usually also involves eating cookies.

And that’s Izzy! You can find out more about her here, when I talked about her and her twin brother. Also, I updated LASER‘s blurb on the My Creations page.

How are all your writing projects going? Anyone doing Camp NaNo? 

Carpe the heck out of your diems!

There and Back Again– An Author’s Tale

This is years later, but look, he's still wearing his leaf. His children probably never saw him without it. When they asked him about it he would tell them about the fantastic adventure that saved middle earth. He would tell them of the group of adventurers who entered into the adventure of a million lifetimes. He would tell them of the brave men who saved their lives, and all the great heroes who finally brought peace. But he never told them how a simple hobbit gardener made it possible.
I’m back.

Hi.

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There might be a few Nazgul around. Three weeks without posting accumulates all kinds of dust and creatures.

So. I have some exciting news.

My novel basically did this to me:

Introverts lol:

And in the last three weeks, I have gotten some stuff done. Remember when I said I needed to not be distracted and needed to focus on something? Here’s what I focused on:

Number One is probably the best news.

I FINISHED LASER MACRO EDITS!!!

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The story is there. The story is there! And it’s almost in one piece! The structure is sound and the characters have lives and EEEEEEP!!!!

Number Two: I jumped into micro-edits pretty much immediately.

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And I’m up to Chapter… 10.

Which means that I may be (and probably will be done) editing before June.

So… reader-peeps who offered to beta, when is the earliest you’d be able to beta read?

If you had heard only a quarter of what I have heard about him, and I have heard very little of all there is to hear, you would be prepared for any sort of remarkable tale.:

Number Three: I have been sending chapters to my mom and Miss Amanda Fischer as I get done with them. So, quick shout out to them for being lovely betas and helping me work consistently!

This is the happiest meme I've ever seen. Clapping, smiling, Hobbits :)

Number Four: I pitched LASER in a pitch contest.

Winner of the pitch contest will be introduced to an agent that the contest hosts think would be a good fit. Finalists are randomly chosen, however, so…

My view on life:

And that’s about it.

I want to watch LoTR now. But I might settle for Pirates of the Caribbean.

Trust me. You want to watch this video. Or at least listen to it.

DFTBA!

Non-Stop

Oh, hi, it's so good to see you ! / Jane (LBD)

Hi, reader-peeps!

So, I have an announcement.

I am going on hiatus for about three weeks.

With the exception of maybe a Valentine’s Day post if I get it finished, there will not be anymore posts on Spiral-Bound for the rest of February.

As for why, I have something I’m working on. I need to be as undistracted as possible with it. That is all I’m going to say about it.

Have a song. It’s about writing (kind of), so it’s an instant favorite for me. And then Hamilton is just so determined that this song is kinda empowering.

And you guys should really try Hamilton if you haven’t. It isn’t family-friendly in it’s entirety, but if you can get past that, it is great.

So. Don’t forget to be awesome and I will be back in March.

“My name is Lizzie Bennet. And thank you for watching my videos.” (gif) Bye bye, Lizzie

 

Working But Not Writing

Hi, reader-peeps.

So, today’s post is going to be a little different. Less about writing and more about procrastinating. Or cleaning. However you want to look at it.

This morning, I was editing. I was writing a new scene and realized that something had gone terribly wrong. It’s not unfixable and it’s just the beginning of one scene, but it is annoying to the nth degree.

So, I decided that instead of making myself write, I gave myself some slack and I am not going to work on LASER for the rest of the day or at least until I am putting my littlest sister to bed tonight. Because I have kept a pretty consistent writing every day thing for a while, this is not such a big deal. I mean, who here seriously writes every single day?

No hands?

I thought so. Besides, one day off is not a big deal and it would probably be good for me to recharge a bit.

But this leaves me with the dilemma of what do I do for the rest of the day.

I could work on another writing project. But I think I found something I actually want to do more than that.

I want to clean my room.

Cleaning my room has never been an easy task. I’ve shared a room for more of my life than I haven’t. I now share a room with five of my six sisters. And most of the mess in my room is not mine.

But, to be honest with you, my room is getting scary messy and my own area of my room, the part with my bed, desk, bookshelf, and hope chest, is cluttered and messy.

How on earth did I manage to want to clean my room instead of write?

Let’s start with the fact that I am really frustrated with LASER and cleaning sounds more fun than starting a new project and my room would be less of a source of stress if it were cleaner. Also, I found an interesting way to clean efficiently without overwhelming myself.

This morning, I found myself watching a video about 10 ways to make a morning routine easier. Then I saw a video by the same woman on how to clean your house in ten minutes (you know, the thing where a friend is ten minutes from your house and just called to say they were dropping in cleaning). The first step of this house-cleaning method involved gathering up things into a laundry basket and then hiding the laundry baskets.

I hope the woman eventually put away the contents of these baskets.

But this basket method got me thinking.

I am the kind of person who likes to see progress being made and I hate wandering around a room picking up things. I am an advocate of the pile method, in which you get every last thing in the room (not the furniture, obviously) and push it into a pile and then sort the pile into smaller piles and the put the smaller piles away. If the area you are cleaning is bad enough, you may have to stop and put away smaller piles a few times before you are done. But eventually, you will have everything picked up and put away where it goes. Now, a few of my family members do not like this method because they say you are handling things an extra time when you put them in the pile and supposedly it takes longer. Not that any of us have ever timed it. But I like to see that I am making progress. I like to be able to see my work and say “Why, yes, my room does look better!” And this is one of those times that I say that the end justifies the means.

BUT. If you do not consistently work on this pile of clutter in your room until it is done and put away the small piles, your room will lose it’s progress. Which I guess is true for any method of cleaning, but especially this one.

I offer this solution as a compromise. For those of us that have other things to do during the day and cannot take a whole day cleaning especially.

Get a basket.

Fill the basket from one area in your room.

Put away the stuff in the basket.

Repeat as wanted/needed.

You have made progress in your room. You can hopefully see it. It doesn’t take long, maybe 15 minutes. You can do this multiple times throughout the day, in between the other things you do. It doesn’t feel like you have to tackle the entire room at once. Just a basket. Okay, that wasn’t so bad. Let’s do another.

Best thing is that you don’t have to just do this on the floor. Hang up a basket of nice clothing. Put away the basket of things that were on your dresser. Shelve a basket of books! Organize a basket of dolls! Put dirty laundry in it (after everything else because, then you have a basket of dirty laundry and no more basket)! The possibilities are endless!

Now. I am going to go put away a basket of stuff in my room and I am not going to post this until I have done it.

Okay, now, who has a favorite cleaning method? Any awesome cleaning tips or ways to make cleaning your room enjoyable? Tell me in the comments!

DFTBA!

UPDATED TO ADD (JUST BEFORE POSTING): I did it. I cleaned up a basket of stuff from around my desk. Which did fill the basket. And now, I feel better about LASER. I might write before tonight. I guess I just needed a break.